Member James
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@alpha1906 the prologue isn’t anywhere else the manuscript, but offers connectivity later.
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@alpha1906 your 1st chapter is genius. I was laughing out loud multiple times. Mother was an apt name for mother. I liked how “because” was tied into the pain of having an absentee parent. I loved how institutions of higher education were called on the carpet for their exploitive nature. I can’t wait for more!
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This a prologue and chapter 1 to a dark Black Academia project I’ve completed entitled “Fraudulent”. I’m in the process of refining. Thanks all for the help in advance.
Prologue
In the wee hours of an early September morning in 1986, I was speeding down California Highway 13, a tree-lined stretch of road weaving through the Oakland hills. Through…
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I’m really excited to be a new add to the group. My current project, “Fraudulent” takes place in the mid 80s, grounded in the Divine Nine college scene set in the San Francisco Bay Area. Feel free to comment honestly @alpha1906 @debi-fraser @stephanie-pickens @tim-albaugh @J_Mas @sherri-sonnier-johnson @bryan-patrick-avery …
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College student Jimi McDaniels is haunted by the death of his parents and faces the imminent foreclosure of his family home. His life spirals out of control after he starts a volatile relationship with the emotionally fragile debutante Tenaka "Ten" … Continue reading
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Thanks for welcoming me into the group! I’m currently refining a completed Retro Suspense Thriller manuscript entitled “Fraudulent”. Below is a link to the summary. Honest commentary welcomed! https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zBI__YWM2Z_CnZJ0F2FjGmfCLyx5qUbc550vHk74keA/edit?usp=sharing
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College student Jimi McDaniels is haunted by the death of his parents and faces the imminent foreclosure of his family home. His life spirals out of control after he starts a volatile relationship with the emotionally fragile debutante Tenaka "Ten" … Continue reading
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