@j-hubbz I’m reading in parts:

I love the tease, even though I’m not a big proponent of prologues. If it’s in the story, then just start that tease as Chapter 1. It’s great backstory that does a wonderful job of doing a bunch of things: I know the stakes, but the mystery about what happened is still there. Since we play with time and…

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@j-hubbz I’ll read this later tonight. Thanks for uploading!!!

I love Dan Campbell. He just seems like an authentic guy in a game of phonies.

Hahaha! Come on through! He used to be a god, and now, he’s just sad…