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We need one more person for 100 members! Anyone gonna get some folks to meet our goal?
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@alpha1906 the prologue isn’t anywhere else the manuscript, but offers connectivity later.
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@j-hubbz I’m reading in parts:
I love the tease, even though I’m not a big proponent of prologues. If it’s in the story, then just start that tease as Chapter 1. It’s great backstory that does a wonderful job of doing a bunch of things: I know the stakes, but the mystery about what happened is still there. Since we play with time and…
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@alpha1906 your 1st chapter is genius. I was laughing out loud multiple times. Mother was an apt name for mother. I liked how “because” was tied into the pain of having an absentee parent. I loved how institutions of higher education were called on the carpet for their exploitive nature. I can’t wait for more!
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@j-hubbz I’ll read this later tonight. Thanks for uploading!!!
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Those first chapters are really inspiring!! I’m not a novelist. The projects I’ve written that have actually been seen by people are all live events- concerts, comedy, etc.. This year, I finished writing my first feature, and am hoping to film it this summer. I’ve got some other projects in progress, too. Any screenwriters or actors in…
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We WILL have a MetaREAD on Zoom. I guarantee it, and probably soon. Wanna be the first writer with ten pages?
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Sure! Guess I ought to put my pages where my mouth is. I’m also down to read for anyone else’s project. Acting is what I do for a living. But what I really wanna do is cliché.
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I down for that, if the timing works with my schedule.
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Agreed…. he makes me think about the overall coaching scene because he seems to balance between what I view as “old school” coaching approach and “newer age” coaching philosophy. It kinda makes me think of your masculinity conversation @alpha1906
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Amber, a die hard Packer fan for years, now roots for the Lions solely because of Campbell!
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